Subordination
Subordination is more common and more complex than coordination, because subordinate ideas can have a range of relationships, from nearly equal to widely different. Thus, there are many more ways to express subordinate ideas than coordinate ideas, and choosing the correct level of value requires skill.
Look at these two related ideas:
Idea 1: The body uses ferrous iron more efficiently than ferric iron. Idea 2: Ferrous iron is the less frequent form in dietary sources.
In most contexts, Idea 1 would be more important than Idea 2. In what ways can we subordinate Idea 2 to Idea 1? Look at these three possibilities:
A. Subordinate Clause
Although it is the less frequent form in dietary sources, the body uses ferrous iron more efficiently than ferric iron.
B. Relative Clause
The body uses ferrous iron, which is the less frequent form in dietary sources, more efficiently than ferric iron.
C. Adjectival Phrase
The body uses the less frequent ferrous iron form more efficiently than ferric iron.
Here we have assigned Idea 2 differing levels of importance, in a sliding scale, from A. important (but still less important than Idea 1) > B. somewhat important > C. unimportant.
The table expands this explanation:
Step 1: Establish importance of Idea 1 to Idea 2 |
Step 2: Determine relevant model |
Step 3: Select grammar to express Idea 2 |
Step 4: Write sentence |
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60:40 |
2 |
Subordinate Clause |
2Although it is the less frequent form in dietary sources, 1the healthy body uses ferrous iron more efficiently than ferric iron. |
75:25 |
3 |
Relative Clause |
1The healthy body uses ferrous iron, 2which is the less frequent form in dietary sources, more efficiently than ferric iron. |
90:10 |
1 |
Adjectival Phrase |
1The healthy body uses the 2less frequent ferrous iron form more efficiently than ferric iron. |
Next articles
- Two conditions necessary for writing
- Models of the value of sentence parts
- Requirement 1: Ideas must be expressed in the correct hierarchy of value.
- Coordinate Ideas
- Coordination within paragraphs
- Subordination
- Subordination examples
- Requirement 2: Ideas must be expressed economically
- Economic expression
- Appendix