Coordinate Ideas
Coordinate Ideas
The rule for coordinate ideas is simple: logical sameness should be expressed with grammatical sameness.
Express coordinate ideas using a parallel grammatical structure.
Parallelism is the expression of coordinate ideas in a coordinate, or identical, grammatical form.
Example 1:
1. aBill is happy but bsadness is felt by John.
2. aBill is happy but bJohn is feeling sad.
3. aBill is happy but bJohn is sad.
Here, only [Bill is happy] and [John is sad] are gramatically parallel, so only 3. meets the rule that coordinate ideas should be expressed using parallel structure.
Here two more examples:
Example 2:
1. aThe absorption of l-amino acids is active, but bd-amino acids are absorbed passively.
2. aThe absorption of l-amino acids is active, but bthe body absorbs d-amino acids passively.
3. aThe absorption of l-amino acids is active, but bthe absorption of d-amino acids is passive.
Example 3:
As the ideas become more complex, Requirement 1 becomes more important. Here, notice how much clearer the parallel example is:
1. XM907 has been shown ato possess selective affinity for the AMPA/kainate receptor, and bto inhibit AMPA-induced Ca2+ influx into cells in primary cultures of hippocampal cells. cInhibition by this compound of delayed neuronal death has also been demonstrated in gerbil global brain ischemia models.
2. XM907 has been shown ato possess selective affinity for the AMPA/kainate receptor, and bto inhibit AMPA-induced Ca2+ influx into cells in primary cultures of hippocampal cells. This compound has also been shown cto inhibit delayed neuronal death in global brain ischemia models in gerbils.
Next articles
- Two conditions necessary for writing
- Models of the value of sentence parts
- Requirement 1: Ideas must be expressed in the correct hierarchy of value.
- Coordinate Ideas
- Coordination within paragraphs
- Subordination
- Subordination examples
- Requirement 2: Ideas must be expressed economically
- Economic expression
- Appendix